my first poem =D

I See

I see a refuge in the storm
Which all was swept except one form.
I see a bronze piece standing forth
Which saved one who would see henceforth.

I see a scarlet cord on high
When all but one was doomed to die.
I see a light amidst the night
When one but sought to end the fight.

I see a hill of blood and tears
Where one found rest amidst his fears.
I see a sea of nets been drawn
Where one believed and followed on.

I see a Being who saw them all
And for things unseen refuse to fall.

And now, behold, my inner beast!
Have I but courage to do the least?
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JOHN YU

Chim? No? Well, poems always have some form/s of meaning behind it so must always read between the lines and understand... (not literally la).
Writing poems is satisfying but writing commentaries on poems = sad : (